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Alessandra12345

Alessandra12345

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I love my dogs a lot and I've recently become addicted to reading webnovels after using this app. Send help.

2019-01-27 JoinedCanada
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra1234511mth
    Replied to MenacePigeon

    Did you mean by choking on food?

    For a moment, the entire banquet seemed to have formed a boundary line. On one side were the nobles, who were elegantly chatting, and on the other side was Eli, who was gobbling down large chunks of food.
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Ā· Blue And White Ocean
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Shazcam

    yep, we was indeed a lawyer before he died.

    'While that steak and those mashed potatoes looked delicious, I cannot take any chance that this guy might drug me. He may act all nice and friendly, but he is a snake waiting to strike when his prey is vulnerable. I trialed a lot of guys just like him back on Earth for sexual assault and I know he would do anything to accomplish his goal.'
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    Transmigrated as a Ghost
    Fantasy Ā· MegaC
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    F

    Ch 71 Chapter 71: Always the hand
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy Ā· Demonic_angel
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    This was also the first reason I thought of, when it was stated that he had no intention of killing him. Money is the most important. šŸ˜›

    Killing Melodeon, then who should he ask the 10,000 gold coins from?
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    Mage Academy: I Have Infinite Skill Points
    Fantasy Ā· Half-Fated Sir
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    Zhu Xiaotian is such an arrogant and whiney brat. Hope Li Yu absolutely crushes him.

    Ch 40 Zhu Xiaotian's Meltdown Again
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    Heavenly Dao Rankings: I Am Exposed As The Sword God
    Eastern Ā· 7 Years 7 Days
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Depressed_support

    I heard it only gets worse.

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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Rizky_Amd

    I also find that the plot is a little thrown together. The plot was sort of alright for the first 5 chapters, but after that it started to not make sense.

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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Dakotatoni

    I also found how quickly he was healed kind of abrupt. The author could have used such a defining trait to make the story more interesting and the character more developed. Instead they just threw it away almost immediately.

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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Posted

    I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.

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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Alessandra12345

    And by strangle the dude, I mostly mean the mc. Though I do feel that the author should get someone to look over his work because there are a lot of writing mistakes and there have also been some inconsistencies with the story and some really cringe parts included in the plot.

    Ch 16 The Guard
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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    This chapter really made me cringe. What person would just blurt out all his thought and worries to a complete stranger. Then there was the medium thing and the whole pay me to talk to my 'dead' self con, I just can't help but want to strangle this stupid dude. šŸ˜šŸ˜‘šŸ˜

    Ch 16 The Guard
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    Code Collector
    Fantasy Ā· Peltivierre
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    Everytime I see his name, I end up chuckling a little. šŸ˜„šŸ¶

    Dogshit (Wolf King's Puppy)
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    I Truly Have Average Talents
    Urban Ā· Enthusiastic Third Teacher
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    Maybe the chief offers sacrifices to the monsters so they stay away. Another theory is that the chief is a strong monster disguised as a human, who treats the villagers as livestock, he scares away other monsters from his territory, so no monsters go in the village.

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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to DeltaLupus

    not if you think about how he can only cast about three lightning spells.

    Mana: 1698 +
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    If he added enough points into luck he would be so lucky that he wouldn't meet any danger when crossing the ocean. That is if luck doesn't just mean an increase in coins received from killing monsters.

    "ā€¦ Plan A failed, now the plan Bā€¦ it will result in failure too."
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    A more efficient way to upgrade fire resistance would be to stick his hand in or near fire. Of course he'd have to learn/ become more proficient in making a fire.

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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to M1XALI0

    I would always focus on moving my fingers. Though sometimes I would break out of it because of most of my muscles were tensing up out of fear, since on some occasions I would also experience frightening hallucinations, like bugs flying at me or a shadow standing near my bedroom door. Anyway, I'm just glad that it only lasted for about two weeks because those were truly the worst weeks of my life. šŸ‘

    "That scared the hell out of meā€¦ to think that I would stay conscious but without being able to move my bodyā€¦ what a disturbing feeling."
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to Hati_3317

    A few years ago, I had nightmares during my sleep, and sleep paralysis and hallucinations when I woke up. This suffering lasted for two weeks, the cause was probably due to the massive amount of stress, anxiety and depression that I was feeling at that time. I believe this happened around the time I was entering the 10th grade. It really felt like it came out of nowhere because when I usually started school, although I was usually pretty nervous, I never felt that hopeless and panicked. So I can definitely related to anyone who's also experienced the 'joy' of being conscious but being unable to move a muscle.

    "That scared the hell out of meā€¦ to think that I would stay conscious but without being able to move my bodyā€¦ what a disturbing feeling."
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Replied to ExSoldierLv99

    Wow! What an awesome burn šŸ”„ You've earned my respect. šŸ‘

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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy Ā· ExSoldierLv99
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  • Alessandra12345
    Alessandra123452yr
    Commented

    yyyyyyeeeeeeesssssss! JUSTICE!!!

    Exposing Wen Ruo (1)
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    From Sidekick to Bigshot
    Urban Ā· Er Fengchong
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