Review Detail of Lagus in Factory Inc.

I really like the idea of this story, but it goes down hill real fast when it comes to the show don't tell. There is often a mention of a fascinating moment between characters, but I would prefer if the reader could actually get to experience these moments. One of the things the author gets well tho, is that the characters actually seem somewhat real. With the exceptions of the clones, but I suppose that is story related. Although at one point there is one that wants equality for clones and people, which doesn't really make sense with clones shown. To finish off: the writing is meh. It is readable, but there are plenty of spelling and type errors.