I reall don't know how to start... First off it is written really good and it has a semi- good background but still good . But that's where i have to complain .....but don't get me wrong , because i am complaining more because some personal things not because this Novel is bad smth. The thing is...... SPOILER!!!!......I really liked this Idea about the Mc and this Novel but as quick as you got my attention you lost it. Basicly the Mc as it was told in the beginning get sent back before the big bang and he created a system which should make him do anything and everything and he could become a (God) because he can creat things out of nothing. But a few secounds after he got sent back the system gains a Awareness and is a female Tsundere who doesn't care about the MC and is making it even harder for him and he has to work for everything. So don't get me wrong this is a good idea but you got my hopes up really high but you let them fall even more. If you gave him a system from the beginning which just is monotonous and helps him ....then okay. But at first you give the reader(me )The hope that he will become really OP but in secounds you make him some lap Dog of THE SYSTEM HE HIMSELF CREATED !!!!.... Anyway i am dropping it because it kind pisses me off but in the end i say for all the people who doesn't care about what i said in the beginng ...just read it because it is worth your time and a try. Bye ;))
Vindeckman
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