Review Detail of Xeno_Elemental in Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?

Okay, writing quality, there is NO breaks. There is so much information that it gives you a headache. Separate it a bit and make it digestible in bits. Stability of updates is fine, I don't mind. Story development is basically overshadowed by the mass amount of words that pile onto you. Character design, is almost the same thing, but the description on some characters are hard to understand because it's not simplified enough. World background... I don't need to say anything else now do I? Still, keep trucking.