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Dunamis
DunamisLv34yr
2021-04-10 14:56

The writing is superb in verbosity and the concept is not unique but extremely interesting and well filled in. The main character develops well but unfortunately his development is a parabola. Without spoiling, it is suffice to say that he ends up steeped in issues he never initially finished conquering while forcing himself to stay in the atmosphere of a team setting that is clearly not conducive to his growth. The authors update stability antics speak for themself.

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AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13

and amout of lies and broken promises. On top of giant fall of quality in last few chapters

daoistpimpdaddy
daoistpimpdaddyLv15

There is irony in someone in criticizing verbosity when the first sentence in the review used verbose…[img=recommend]

Dunamis
DunamisLv3

You wanted me to critize the how verbose it is without actually using the word? I don't think you know what irony or verbosity is, because skirting around the word by using more words unnecessarily would give it the ironic affect you that you seem to be mistaken about.

daoistpimpdaddy:There is irony in someone in criticizing verbosity when the first sentence in the review used verbose…[img=recommend]
daoistpimpdaddy
daoistpimpdaddyLv15

Haha no reason to skirt the word, but there a quite a few synonyms for that particular word, verbose. All that aside, I found The Oracle Paths one of better written stories especially considering most authors do not have English as their native language. Additionally, the plot is more thought out, characters less one-dimensional, and pace of story quicker. Would encourage you to take another look if you are so inclined 👍.

Dunamis:You wanted me to critize the how verbose it is without actually using the word? I don't think you know what irony or verbosity is, because skirting around the word by using more words unnecessarily would give it the ironic affect you that you seem to be mistaken about.
Dunamis
DunamisLv3

I read 400 chapters of it. I've taken plenty of looks, but thanks for the offer lol

daoistpimpdaddy:Haha no reason to skirt the word, but there a quite a few synonyms for that particular word, verbose. All that aside, I found The Oracle Paths one of better written stories especially considering most authors do not have English as their native language. Additionally, the plot is more thought out, characters less one-dimensional, and pace of story quicker. Would encourage you to take another look if you are so inclined 👍.
daoistpimpdaddy
daoistpimpdaddyLv15

Fair enough. To each his/her own I agree Eve of Chaos is a great story, and it’s the only other story I am reading on webnovel. Birth of demonic sword is terrible but you can see Eve has gotten better with Chaos

Dunamis:I read 400 chapters of it. I've taken plenty of looks, but thanks for the offer lol
Dunamis
DunamisLv3

Are you doing alright buddy? You sound insane rn

daoistpimpdaddy:Fair enough. To each his/her own I agree Eve of Chaos is a great story, and it’s the only other story I am reading on webnovel. Birth of demonic sword is terrible but you can see Eve has gotten better with Chaos
daoistpimpdaddy
daoistpimpdaddyLv15

No just sociable, but guess this is not the venue, and you are not the person to interact with. Happy to close this interaction.

Dunamis
DunamisLv3

1. You said "I agree eve of chaos is a great story" when I never mentioned him in the first place. 2. Eve is the author not a story. The other person who replied on this thread a long time ago has chaos in their name that's the only tie in I can see. If you genuinely have schizophrenia or something and I agrevated that condition I apologize. Either way goodbye.

daoistpimpdaddy:Fair enough. To each his/her own I agree Eve of Chaos is a great story, and it’s the only other story I am reading on webnovel. Birth of demonic sword is terrible but you can see Eve has gotten better with Chaos
daoistpimpdaddy
daoistpimpdaddyLv15

I never insulted you once in our interaction, but you felt need to do it numerous times. Nothing else needs to be said.All the best.

Dunamis:1. You said "I agree eve of chaos is a great story" when I never mentioned him in the first place. 2. Eve is the author not a story. The other person who replied on this thread a long time ago has chaos in their name that's the only tie in I can see. If you genuinely have schizophrenia or something and I agrevated that condition I apologize. Either way goodbye.
Clint_Eastwood
Clint_EastwoodLv15

Eyy what up nerds?

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