Review Detail of Kari_Rakitan in Masks and Shows

I like the way the protagonist scrutinizes her own life and strives for perfection. You show, not tell that the protagonist is a perfectionist. This also reminds me of how I don't miss school at all. I did "AP Everything" as well and had a lot of doing it, but I'm glad I get to do what I want now. I wasn't focusing on grammar, but I didn't see any errors.