The story is interesting, captivating from the first chapter itself. Story is developing well, the stability of updates is good. The Character Design is good an so is the World Background is equally good. The Writing quality need to be improved. There are issues with grammar like punctuation, commas, inverted commas, capital letter for names etc as well as sentence construction. This can be remedied by running your draft through a grammar checker like Grammarly. I am using it. Keep on writing. All the best.
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