Review Detail of Primordiales in Rupegia
Review detail
It bored me, the truth was good while it lasted, this novel is very depraved and I do not like it, you presented the characters too well so that later you make them be either whores, nymphs, infidels etc, the truth is that way of ruin the characters, if I had not read the side chapter, I would continue reading this novel but unfortunately I'm going to leave it here, maybe I'll continue the novel when the disgust I feel passes a bit, already with all that side chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if In the future there are NTR'S or rapes among other things, the MC seems to like infidelity so I would not be surprised if one of his women cheats on him or someone rapes them while he watches them or there may even be orgies between all his harem members and others Men while he watches, I know but I do not want to risk reading this, the truth is a shame either with quality or the length of the chapters you would have to be one of the best Webnovel novels, unfortunately the plot does not arrive, very d You're lucky .. Bye brother until next time ..
Rupegia
Manasong
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There’s swinging + beastiality(he does the nono to a fox, a monkey and another one I don’t remember rn)
Caveman21:Well this was a clusterf**k of a convo to read. I’m glad there’s no real NTR, that’s a big no go for me. The reviewer guy had me worried for a sec
Previous review 3 / 8⭐ Unfortunately you won't let me post another review but I'll leave it here, for those who read this be careful with the genres .. I'm not liking where this is going, everyone in their harem is Lesbian among them, they get more excited when they have sex with each other than with the protagonist, the truth is that your protagonist would be better if she were a woman, it is frustrating to have a harem and have to do That they are lesbians to satisfy them all, if it were he would not have a harem in those conditions It is kind of frustrating it seems that Hana is the man in Wolf's harem, it is unfortunate, the protagonist is somewhat lazy, like all Japanese although not Sea is a beta, he is always a secondary character in sex scenes, he has a very good trap but the way he uses it is rubbish, he could do much better things if he trained better, unfortunately he is a beta MC that we expected, really The MC piss me off too much, there is something that humans have and that is called adaptation, we can adapt depending on the situation so we humans evolve, adapting to whatever it is, but your MC doesn't adapt even for months a, the female characters, I really like Hana too much, and I don't like Alessia, the truth is kind of annoying and you don't give prominence to the other heroines with the MC being so obsessed with her. Another point is that this is like reading a summary, it lacks interaction, points of view, thinking of other people, it is super boring to always read it from the point of our protagonist I need a perspective of the heroines and the people and what they think about him , You should make side chapters to increase the points of view, I don't know if you already did it in patreon but there is nothing here. The MC is always annoying uncomfortable about everything, isn't he supposed to be a technological researcher in his world? So why is he so stupid? Shouldn't he be smarter? Why are they always cowering about everything, it pisses me off that he is always scared by everything, it's okay to be scared that makes us human after all, but really so much? .. well if you like Lesbian harem, beta MC, secondary character MC in sex scenes, lazy MC, stupid MC, female is better a man in sex (eye without machismo I say it for hana there are some who do not like the lesbian harem like me), MC without thorns, MC mentally weak (I do not say it offensive because there are many mentally weak people I am one of them, I suffered a lot in my life but I still keep giving face to it), MC makes a harem and cannot satisfy them all and depends on his harem members to satisfy each other, MC pervert with ntr pleasure (let's tell the truth, what women do in their harem is Ntr, you and I know it s, although some may find it funny, meeting you with someone other than your husband, lover or whatever is NtR), MC with fetish Zoofilia, MC who lives off his past (despite not having a depressing or somewhat traumatic past is He likes to talk about his past and I do not like that, things remain in the past and we must not be afraid of facing it that makes us a person, if we live from the past we are too cowardly not to look at the present), MC with stupid nightmares ( the MC in 30 chapters had more nightmares that I don't know, it's not bad, it's just annoying), moralistic MC (the truth is annoying, it is true that killing in real life is wrong, but remember something, murder is very common in the world you have to know that we do not have a rosy world as he paints it, in my country more than 100 murders occur per year, you live in fear of being involved in an assassination attempt at any moment), MC coward (I think I already said it but I repeat it, killing is something normal there is no need to be afraid Or, we kill many things in life and we do not realize it, that is why it bothers me that the MC preaches about life, when he is already killing something to eat meat, we kill mosquitoes, ants, when we fish we kill worms, fish, to eat meat kills many animals, even bacteria have life, enough of the predictions of life if we kill to continue living, which your MC continues with his cheap moralism), MC with a slight hero complex, the truth is that you don't have Why save people just because you have power, in the world there are many powerful politicians who kill people or even rob them, they do not have the obligation to help anyone, as the protagonist, even if he has power, does not have to save one life, that is something that bothers me, not because I saved it, it is like he talks about saving a life as if it wanted to be saved, there are many people who want to die and saving it from their death is not good, as well as letting rapists and murderers live like bandits is something that cannot be e allow, people say that we always deserve an opportunity in my life, but that is a lie, would you give a rapist and murderer a second chance? Not even if you give it to them, the world is not going to give it to them, the media They practically steal the second chance from people when they publish their sins on TV, even if they get out of prison, they will not live to have a second chance in society, so it is the same with the bandits that he wants to let live depending on whether he They perform or not, that is done by someone with a hero complex who does not know what the world is. The MC is 30 years old and acts like a 15-year-old boy, the adult mind is supposed to be more rational than the mind of a teenager, but it is not seen here. Well that's all my criticism so far when I finish reading write another.
Primordiales:Previous review 3 / 8⭐ Unfortunately you won't let me post another review but I'll leave it here, for those who read this be careful with the genres .. I'm not liking where this is going, everyone in their harem is Lesbian among them, they get more excited when they have sex with each other than with the protagonist, the truth is that your protagonist would be better if she were a woman, it is frustrating to have a harem and have to do That they are lesbians to satisfy them all, if it were he would not have a harem in those conditions It is kind of frustrating it seems that Hana is the man in Wolf's harem, it is unfortunate, the protagonist is somewhat lazy, like all Japanese although not Sea is a beta, he is always a secondary character in sex scenes, he has a very good trap but the way he uses it is rubbish, he could do much better things if he trained better, unfortunately he is a beta MC that we expected, really The MC piss me off too much, there is something that humans have and that is called adaptation, we can adapt depending on the situation so we humans evolve, adapting to whatever it is, but your MC doesn't adapt even for months a, the female characters, I really like Hana too much, and I don't like Alessia, the truth is kind of annoying and you don't give prominence to the other heroines with the MC being so obsessed with her. Another point is that this is like reading a summary, it lacks interaction, points of view, thinking of other people, it is super boring to always read it from the point of our protagonist I need a perspective of the heroines and the people and what they think about him , You should make side chapters to increase the points of view, I don't know if you already did it in patreon but there is nothing here. The MC is always annoying uncomfortable about everything, isn't he supposed to be a technological researcher in his world? So why is he so stupid? Shouldn't he be smarter? Why are they always cowering about everything, it pisses me off that he is always scared by everything, it's okay to be scared that makes us human after all, but really so much? .. well if you like Lesbian harem, beta MC, secondary character MC in sex scenes, lazy MC, stupid MC, female is better a man in sex (eye without machismo I say it for hana there are some who do not like the lesbian harem like me), MC without thorns, MC mentally weak (I do not say it offensive because there are many mentally weak people I am one of them, I suffered a lot in my life but I still keep giving face to it), MC makes a harem and cannot satisfy them all and depends on his harem members to satisfy each other, MC pervert with ntr pleasure (let's tell the truth, what women do in their harem is Ntr, you and I know it s, although some may find it funny, meeting you with someone other than your husband, lover or whatever is NtR), MC with fetish Zoofilia, MC who lives off his past (despite not having a depressing or somewhat traumatic past is He likes to talk about his past and I do not like that, things remain in the past and we must not be afraid of facing it that makes us a person, if we live from the past we are too cowardly not to look at the present), MC with stupid nightmares ( the MC in 30 chapters had more nightmares that I don't know, it's not bad, it's just annoying), moralistic MC (the truth is annoying, it is true that killing in real life is wrong, but remember something, murder is very common in the world you have to know that we do not have a rosy world as he paints it, in my country more than 100 murders occur per year, you live in fear of being involved in an assassination attempt at any moment), MC coward (I think I already said it but I repeat it, killing is something normal there is no need to be afraid Or, we kill many things in life and we do not realize it, that is why it bothers me that the MC preaches about life, when he is already killing something to eat meat, we kill mosquitoes, ants, when we fish we kill worms, fish, to eat meat kills many animals, even bacteria have life, enough of the predictions of life if we kill to continue living, which your MC continues with his cheap moralism), MC with a slight hero complex, the truth is that you don't have Why save people just because you have power, in the world there are many powerful politicians who kill people or even rob them, they do not have the obligation to help anyone, as the protagonist, even if he has power, does not have to save one life, that is something that bothers me, not because I saved it, it is like he talks about saving a life as if it wanted to be saved, there are many people who want to die and saving it from their death is not good, as well as letting rapists and murderers live like bandits is something that cannot be e allow, people say that we always deserve an opportunity in my life, but that is a lie, would you give a rapist and murderer a second chance? Not even if you give it to them, the world is not going to give it to them, the media They practically steal the second chance from people when they publish their sins on TV, even if they get out of prison, they will not live to have a second chance in society, so it is the same with the bandits that he wants to let live depending on whether he They perform or not, that is done by someone with a hero complex who does not know what the world is. The MC is 30 years old and acts like a 15-year-old boy, the adult mind is supposed to be more rational than the mind of a teenager, but it is not seen here. Well that's all my criticism so far when I finish reading write another.
Goddamn, what a rant. You even lose your train of thought sometimes, so I won't even try to answer this nightmare. Truth is, if I changed every single complaint you have, I'd end up with a stereotypical xianxia whose focus is solely on wish fulfillment. This isn't a "nice" story where characters only do pleasing actions and nothing really bad ever happens. If my story is boring, what you want is enough to make me drool. I'll address only three points. The first is that the MC isn't dumb, he's realistic, and because you can't accept that people have failings, you think he's "dumb." It's easy to understand what the "right" decision is, it's much, much harder to actually do it. You also didn't provide any examples about his "dumb decisions" so that's all I can say about it. Second, people change, the MC DOES change, but it's not easy, and it's not fast. People are adaptable, yes, he showed it how adaptable he is ever since the beginning, but you're not paying attention to it because all you want is to take charge of the story and have the character do what *you* want instead of just enjoying the story for what it is. It's really annoying when people can't differentiate a good story from a wish-fulfillment story, so at least I'm thankful Webnovel lets me answer to reviews like this. Third, THERE'S NO NTR. NO, THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH EACH OTHER ISN'T NTR, IT'S EXPECTED OF A GROUP MARRIAGE THAT PEOPLE LOVE EACH OTHER. IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THAT THE MC WON'T BE AT THE CENTER OF EVERY SINGLE SCENE, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT HANA IS A "MAN" BECAUSE SHE'S AGGRESSIVE. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT WOLF IS "BETA." YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU COMPLAIN ABOUT WOLF HAVING SEX WITH PROSTITUTES, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH OTHER WOMEN IS NTR. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IT ISN'T NTR, IT'S *SWINGING*, BLOODY HELL. PUT THIS INTO YOUR HEAD. NO MATTER WHAT YOU THINK, THIS STORY ISN'T NTR UNLESS YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST.
Primordiales:Previous review 3 / 8⭐ Unfortunately you won't let me post another review but I'll leave it here, for those who read this be careful with the genres .. I'm not liking where this is going, everyone in their harem is Lesbian among them, they get more excited when they have sex with each other than with the protagonist, the truth is that your protagonist would be better if she were a woman, it is frustrating to have a harem and have to do That they are lesbians to satisfy them all, if it were he would not have a harem in those conditions It is kind of frustrating it seems that Hana is the man in Wolf's harem, it is unfortunate, the protagonist is somewhat lazy, like all Japanese although not Sea is a beta, he is always a secondary character in sex scenes, he has a very good trap but the way he uses it is rubbish, he could do much better things if he trained better, unfortunately he is a beta MC that we expected, really The MC piss me off too much, there is something that humans have and that is called adaptation, we can adapt depending on the situation so we humans evolve, adapting to whatever it is, but your MC doesn't adapt even for months a, the female characters, I really like Hana too much, and I don't like Alessia, the truth is kind of annoying and you don't give prominence to the other heroines with the MC being so obsessed with her. Another point is that this is like reading a summary, it lacks interaction, points of view, thinking of other people, it is super boring to always read it from the point of our protagonist I need a perspective of the heroines and the people and what they think about him , You should make side chapters to increase the points of view, I don't know if you already did it in patreon but there is nothing here. The MC is always annoying uncomfortable about everything, isn't he supposed to be a technological researcher in his world? So why is he so stupid? Shouldn't he be smarter? Why are they always cowering about everything, it pisses me off that he is always scared by everything, it's okay to be scared that makes us human after all, but really so much? .. well if you like Lesbian harem, beta MC, secondary character MC in sex scenes, lazy MC, stupid MC, female is better a man in sex (eye without machismo I say it for hana there are some who do not like the lesbian harem like me), MC without thorns, MC mentally weak (I do not say it offensive because there are many mentally weak people I am one of them, I suffered a lot in my life but I still keep giving face to it), MC makes a harem and cannot satisfy them all and depends on his harem members to satisfy each other, MC pervert with ntr pleasure (let's tell the truth, what women do in their harem is Ntr, you and I know it s, although some may find it funny, meeting you with someone other than your husband, lover or whatever is NtR), MC with fetish Zoofilia, MC who lives off his past (despite not having a depressing or somewhat traumatic past is He likes to talk about his past and I do not like that, things remain in the past and we must not be afraid of facing it that makes us a person, if we live from the past we are too cowardly not to look at the present), MC with stupid nightmares ( the MC in 30 chapters had more nightmares that I don't know, it's not bad, it's just annoying), moralistic MC (the truth is annoying, it is true that killing in real life is wrong, but remember something, murder is very common in the world you have to know that we do not have a rosy world as he paints it, in my country more than 100 murders occur per year, you live in fear of being involved in an assassination attempt at any moment), MC coward (I think I already said it but I repeat it, killing is something normal there is no need to be afraid Or, we kill many things in life and we do not realize it, that is why it bothers me that the MC preaches about life, when he is already killing something to eat meat, we kill mosquitoes, ants, when we fish we kill worms, fish, to eat meat kills many animals, even bacteria have life, enough of the predictions of life if we kill to continue living, which your MC continues with his cheap moralism), MC with a slight hero complex, the truth is that you don't have Why save people just because you have power, in the world there are many powerful politicians who kill people or even rob them, they do not have the obligation to help anyone, as the protagonist, even if he has power, does not have to save one life, that is something that bothers me, not because I saved it, it is like he talks about saving a life as if it wanted to be saved, there are many people who want to die and saving it from their death is not good, as well as letting rapists and murderers live like bandits is something that cannot be e allow, people say that we always deserve an opportunity in my life, but that is a lie, would you give a rapist and murderer a second chance? Not even if you give it to them, the world is not going to give it to them, the media They practically steal the second chance from people when they publish their sins on TV, even if they get out of prison, they will not live to have a second chance in society, so it is the same with the bandits that he wants to let live depending on whether he They perform or not, that is done by someone with a hero complex who does not know what the world is. The MC is 30 years old and acts like a 15-year-old boy, the adult mind is supposed to be more rational than the mind of a teenager, but it is not seen here. Well that's all my criticism so far when I finish reading write another.
You definitely don't know what a harem is, a harem is composed of 2 or more girls that LOVE THE SAME GUY AND ONLY THAT GUY. Not the girls love the other girls and the future harem members, they don't fall in love with other harem members because if that happens then it isn't a harem anymore because its an entirely different thing. Based on the review, the MC seems like he's just in the harem for the sake of it. MC also doesn't know what the word NTR means, the author also clearly doesn't understand what NTR is or the author just have a twisted understanding of what a harem is. I know some harem have some yuri teases but it does not go as low as having *** with other harem members BEHIND THE MC'S BACK. Decent people would know that its not normal for harem members having *** behind the MC's back, nor would they tolerate it if they are in the MC's situation. I don't know if you are into Yuri NTR but I ain't kink shaming, but you still have a retarded view of what a harem is supposed to be or what NTR means.
Manasong:Goddamn, what a rant. You even lose your train of thought sometimes, so I won't even try to answer this nightmare. Truth is, if I changed every single complaint you have, I'd end up with a stereotypical xianxia whose focus is solely on wish fulfillment. This isn't a "nice" story where characters only do pleasing actions and nothing really bad ever happens. If my story is boring, what you want is enough to make me drool. I'll address only three points. The first is that the MC isn't dumb, he's realistic, and because you can't accept that people have failings, you think he's "dumb." It's easy to understand what the "right" decision is, it's much, much harder to actually do it. You also didn't provide any examples about his "dumb decisions" so that's all I can say about it. Second, people change, the MC DOES change, but it's not easy, and it's not fast. People are adaptable, yes, he showed it how adaptable he is ever since the beginning, but you're not paying attention to it because all you want is to take charge of the story and have the character do what *you* want instead of just enjoying the story for what it is. It's really annoying when people can't differentiate a good story from a wish-fulfillment story, so at least I'm thankful Webnovel lets me answer to reviews like this. Third, THERE'S NO NTR. NO, THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH EACH OTHER ISN'T NTR, IT'S EXPECTED OF A GROUP MARRIAGE THAT PEOPLE LOVE EACH OTHER. IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THAT THE MC WON'T BE AT THE CENTER OF EVERY SINGLE SCENE, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT HANA IS A "MAN" BECAUSE SHE'S AGGRESSIVE. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT WOLF IS "BETA." YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU COMPLAIN ABOUT WOLF HAVING SEX WITH PROSTITUTES, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH OTHER WOMEN IS NTR. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IT ISN'T NTR, IT'S *SWINGING*, BLOODY HELL. PUT THIS INTO YOUR HEAD. NO MATTER WHAT YOU THINK, THIS STORY ISN'T NTR UNLESS YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST.
"a harem is composed of 2 or more girls that LOVE THE SAME GUY AND ONLY THAT GUY." In what dictionary? The word is pretty loose in its definition. Group marriage is a more descriptive word of what they have, but the word "harem" still applies to their relationship 100%. "Not the girls love the other girls and the future harem members, they don't fall in love with other harem members because if that happens then it isn't a harem anymore because its an entirely different thing." Yes, it becomes a group marriage, a SUBSET of a harem, but still a harem nonetheless, specially because the MC is still the main lover of everyone. "based on the review, the MC seems like he's just in the harem for the sake of it. MC also doesn't know what the word NTR means," So you didn't actually read the story and just took the word of an ignorant reviewer as the truth? Don't waste my time with bullshit arguments. "NTR" has the explicit need for one of the participants to be either blatantly cheating or having *** with another in a way that's deliberately trying to incite jealousy. That does NOT happen in this story. What does happen is SWINGING, the act of having casual sexual relationships with someone that's not your spouse where everyone has agreed beforehand that it's not cheating. In this story, Wolf and his wives only sleep with other WOMEN, there's no swinging with other men, and nobody gets jealous in a way to incite NTR. If you think it's NTR, then there's a problem with YOU. Please, don't spew your ignorant bullshit at me just because you're intolerant about non-standard relationships.
Freix_Gren:You definitely don't know what a harem is, a harem is composed of 2 or more girls that LOVE THE SAME GUY AND ONLY THAT GUY. Not the girls love the other girls and the future harem members, they don't fall in love with other harem members because if that happens then it isn't a harem anymore because its an entirely different thing. Based on the review, the MC seems like he's just in the harem for the sake of it. MC also doesn't know what the word NTR means, the author also clearly doesn't understand what NTR is or the author just have a twisted understanding of what a harem is. I know some harem have some yuri teases but it does not go as low as having *** with other harem members BEHIND THE MC'S BACK. Decent people would know that its not normal for harem members having *** behind the MC's back, nor would they tolerate it if they are in the MC's situation. I don't know if you are into Yuri NTR but I ain't kink shaming, but you still have a retarded view of what a harem is supposed to be or what NTR means.
This kid making trouble with everyone in the reply there's something called *freedom of speech* and an *opinion* you call others ignorant but you don't even know what these 2 things are I stated so, please stop making issues because not everyone thinks what you think he might have his own definition and also *** isn't swinging so get a life
Manasong:"a harem is composed of 2 or more girls that LOVE THE SAME GUY AND ONLY THAT GUY." In what dictionary? The word is pretty loose in its definition. Group marriage is a more descriptive word of what they have, but the word "harem" still applies to their relationship 100%. "Not the girls love the other girls and the future harem members, they don't fall in love with other harem members because if that happens then it isn't a harem anymore because its an entirely different thing." Yes, it becomes a group marriage, a SUBSET of a harem, but still a harem nonetheless, specially because the MC is still the main lover of everyone. "based on the review, the MC seems like he's just in the harem for the sake of it. MC also doesn't know what the word NTR means," So you didn't actually read the story and just took the word of an ignorant reviewer as the truth? Don't waste my time with bullshit arguments. "NTR" has the explicit need for one of the participants to be either blatantly cheating or having *** with another in a way that's deliberately trying to incite jealousy. That does NOT happen in this story. What does happen is SWINGING, the act of having casual sexual relationships with someone that's not your spouse where everyone has agreed beforehand that it's not cheating. In this story, Wolf and his wives only sleep with other WOMEN, there's no swinging with other men, and nobody gets jealous in a way to incite NTR. If you think it's NTR, then there's a problem with YOU. Please, don't spew your ignorant bullshit at me just because you're intolerant about non-standard relationships.
NotMickeyMouse:This kid making trouble with everyone in the reply there's something called *freedom of speech* and an *opinion* you call others ignorant but you don't even know what these 2 things are I stated so, please stop making issues because not everyone thinks what you think he might have his own definition and also *** isn't swinging so get a lifeimage
So I read in another review on Royal Road that the MC let his harem have *** with another man (something like sharing one of his woman with another man who has is a brother of one of the MC woman) and he mentioned a few other example then he mentioned that the MC don't mind orher people see his women in lingerie or in short "naked" ... Basically he say the the MC don't care about his woman dignity that much. so as one who has a similar problem with this story can you tell if it's true.
Freedom of speech got nothing to do here. If anything, it's about libel as they're shit-talking things they know nothing about. They're just arguing semantics, trying to bend definitions to very specific meanings that just simply aren't true. This is *my* novel, and webnovel gave me the right to argue about shit reviews that mislead potential readers into dropping something just because they didn't like specific elements of the story.
NotMickeyMouse:This kid making trouble with everyone in the reply there's something called *freedom of speech* and an *opinion* you call others ignorant but you don't even know what these 2 things are I stated so, please stop making issues because not everyone thinks what you think he might have his own definition and also *** isn't swinging so get a lifeimage
NotMickeyMouse:This kid making trouble with everyone in the reply there's something called *freedom of speech* and an *opinion* you call others ignorant but you don't even know what these 2 things are I stated so, please stop making issues because not everyone thinks what you think he might have his own definition and also *** isn't swinging so get a lifeimage
