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This is just my opinion, others may disagree, but I don't care. Writing Quality: It is quite good, but there does seem to be some errors from time to time, but overall I'd say it is better than most fanfics. Update: The rate says it all, 16ch/wk Story development: Quite good, the author built up a "bond" between the mc and Erza quite smoothly. As I haven't read too far just yet I can't say for sure, but there doesn't seem to be a good plot yet, yes some villages were massacred, but it didn't really affect the mc or Erza. Character Design: Can't say much here as the appearance of characters can be searched up quite easily. World Background: Now this... Seems to be a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really explain much about the situation around the main character. For example, Rank G adventurer, what is it? Why not just join a guild? What benefits are there? Then there is also freaking Deadpool who pops out of nowhere for seemingly no reason, which ruins the flow of the story. The MC's wishes haven't been given right off the bat for seemingly no reason. Apparently the mc had to kill someone to unlock the system, but why? It is a cooking system, not a assassination system, so it doesn't seem to make much sense. Then there is the odd names... "Bandit King"(?) Why is some random bandit the bandit King? This was never really explained so I don't know what I should say about this. Lastly, the sword legacy thing from dota(?), some readers may have no clue what it is, and it doesn't help that the internet doesn't explain much. I watched a video and it just seemed to be a character skin, so I don't see the point of it much. (Never played dota in my life). Overall: A good novel that is worth reading, but there are many instances where some scenarios are not explained, which may cause confusion.

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