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DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv144yr
2020-05-04 16:54

This is just my opinion, others may disagree, but I don't care. Writing Quality: It is quite good, but there does seem to be some errors from time to time, but overall I'd say it is better than most fanfics. Update: The rate says it all, 16ch/wk Story development: Quite good, the author built up a "bond" between the mc and Erza quite smoothly. As I haven't read too far just yet I can't say for sure, but there doesn't seem to be a good plot yet, yes some villages were massacred, but it didn't really affect the mc or Erza. Character Design: Can't say much here as the appearance of characters can be searched up quite easily. World Background: Now this... Seems to be a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really explain much about the situation around the main character. For example, Rank G adventurer, what is it? Why not just join a guild? What benefits are there? Then there is also freaking Deadpool who pops out of nowhere for seemingly no reason, which ruins the flow of the story. The MC's wishes haven't been given right off the bat for seemingly no reason. Apparently the mc had to kill someone to unlock the system, but why? It is a cooking system, not a assassination system, so it doesn't seem to make much sense. Then there is the odd names... "Bandit King"(?) Why is some random bandit the bandit King? This was never really explained so I don't know what I should say about this. Lastly, the sword legacy thing from dota(?), some readers may have no clue what it is, and it doesn't help that the internet doesn't explain much. I watched a video and it just seemed to be a character skin, so I don't see the point of it much. (Never played dota in my life). Overall: A good novel that is worth reading, but there are many instances where some scenarios are not explained, which may cause confusion.

A Father's Duty

ChocoCrinkols
4.8
140 Chs

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

who the love interests?, also what are the worlds?

4yr
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

I dropped, but from what I can tell, the love interest is Erza's mother, Irene, and the world is Fairy Tail... U can give it a try if you want I guess...

amaturewriter:who the love interests?, also what are the worlds?
4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

oh no....if its irene mom then nah,,,thx anyway

DaoOfCulture:I dropped, but from what I can tell, the love interest is Erza's mother, Irene, and the world is Fairy Tail... U can give it a try if you want I guess...
4yr
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Np

amaturewriter:oh no....if its irene mom then nah,,,thx anyway
4yr
Other Reviews
LiveMan
LiveManLv4

Absolutely LOVE IT. Like the author said, the story is very slow and focuses more on slice of life than power grinding and fights. The MC gets reincarnated in Fairy Tail and becomes the father of Erza. The story is very wholesome as it shows the love and relationship between family members perfectly. The story shows how a dad interacts with his daughter, like teaching her to wash her hands before eating, telling her a bedtime story, and other moments that we take for granted. All in all, it's a great break from all the other novels and fanfics on this site due to its relaxing, yet captivating plot and story. Hope the author keeps up the good work.

4yr

EditorBr0701
EditorBr0701Lv4

Reading this novel so far I only have good things to talk about. If YOU are not a damn PERVERT, I am absolutely sure that you will fall in love with the characters. The charisma that I feel every time I read a chapter is indescribable. Thank you author-san for creating this wonderful story. ❤😊😊😊

4yr
Evil_Dude
Evil_DudeLv12

I was bored of all fanfic and had great headache reading them until I read this novel which turn my hellish fanfic life into heaven . All my headache gone and I feel happy I read this fanfic. Mc is not forceful not trash and not overkill story not fast not slow not rushed. Overall best of all for me

4yr
subhi
subhiLv14

The author stopped writing and started trolling Too bad the story dead. ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... .......

4yr
Daoist_Voidwalker
Daoist_VoidwalkerLv14

Great story so far. The mc is likeable and so are the other characters. As this is a AU having OOCs is unavoidable and nobody should really be surprised. The original timeline has been disregarded comlepetely and apparently there never was a time-travel 400 years into the future. up to this point the timeline doesnt really matter anyway. The theme is light-hearted, the story is not deep and convoluted and never tries to appear to be. And in my opinion it doesnt have to be. We want slice of life interactions. Some nice powerups and funny smack-downs and fluff. Thats why I am here and thats what I good. I am happy and if you want the same then go right ahead and enjoy this enjoyable fic. Quality is very good, minor mistakes but still easily readible. Stable updates. For someone who does this in his free time without compensation this is everything you can ask for. Keep up the good work Mr. Author! And thanks for sharing

4yr
Daoist443295
Daoist443295Lv1

If you are looking for an exciting story with an innovative storyline or that can surprise you ... I advise you to look for another novel. On the other hand, if you are after an adorable story (without being boring) with interesting, charismatic and cute characters, you have won the lottery! I recommend you read it, as this is AMAZING!

4yr
Godlyghostwatcher
GodlyghostwatcherLv15

Cool story .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4yr
Moon_Fiction
Moon_FictionLv6

One of the best fairy tale fanfiction I read. it has a similar concept father in Marvel.

4yr
FOX_ZRS
FOX_ZRSLv4

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