Item: The Black Market
Rating: 2.2
Author: DeceitfulDucky

DeceitfulDuckyLv45yr

2019-12-19 18:10

From what has been released so far, the plot is pretty interesting. The first few chapters are horrendously rough, and almost made me stop reading immediately, but putting aside those chapters, the story is quite interesting. There are quite a few plot holes and inconsistencies that must be overlooked, but that's a given with any novel. Honestly, the novel reads like a edgy **** powertrip to me, but it might develop into something good in the future. I can't honestly recommend this novel as something to get heavily invested into, but it is something that you can read out of boredom, like the unhealthy foods that can be easily binged. I don't understand why it has such high ratings, and quite frankly, don't think it deserves such as the quality of both the writing and thr storytelling is not amazing. Hopefully, my honest review is not deleted to keep the ratings of the novel high. P.S. I do not mean to discourage or hate on the author or their work; I am only giving my honest opinion about the novel. I hope that the author can and will continue writing their story and improving along the way, but I also hope that the novel can have honest reviews to fairly represent itself while giving credit to novels that truly are high quality and deserving of their ratings.

The Black Market

Condemned

4.6

210 Chs

Liked by 31 people

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CondemnedAuthor

I dont delete reviews. I don't even know that i can delete

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DeceitfulDuckyLv4

That's good! I truly do hope that you continue to write and improve while taking pride in your work and don't find negative reviews too disheartening! Also, don't know why t e e n was censored

5yr

CondemnedAuthor

Yeah sure

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CondemnedAuthor

Anyway im just writing to relieve my boredom.

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John_JigglerLv3

you can learn it from authors of vampire system and I reincarted as a slut or slug something.

Condemned:I dont delete reviews. I don't even know that i can delete

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Here is my second book. I wrote this for fun and also for you guys to enjoy. By the way if you have suggestions, then you are free to give some. Thanks and have fun.

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