Honestly.... This story is shit ngl like I was super interested at the start, he's got this cool assassin background which could be interesting to delve into... Then it goes to shit after he parts from Olivia, of course its more of a slow decline, oh and the bs about the katana, anyway skipping the setlment arc since its not enough to be mad about, his whole thing with Sophia is dumb, one she is way to smart for her age, like I understand Olivia due to her circumstances, but this Sophia should be alot more childish, two not only is he being manipulated with mind of an adult but also when they hint at making him a subordinate he wants to, he doesn't even have a real reason to it.... Finally he also doesn't act like someone trained, like even if you are trying to be more 'emotional' as someone trained you naturally won't understand how to show emotions as well so alot of his dumb behaviours and 'slip ups' shouldn't be possible, There's tones of other shit going on but that is my main focus.. .
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