Review Detail of timmyboy in Code Zulu Alpha: Nerd in the Apocalypse!
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There is too much incorrect grammar. Blood is now flowing out of my eyes, its sadly worse then translate machine language. If you are first language is English, I would pass this one up. I am sure the story is not bad, the characters could be solid. However a story needs to have good writing quality first most. I believe that the author will improve with each chapter, but I don't have that patience. So that is why I am passing this one up.
Code Zulu Alpha: Nerd in the Apocalypse!
Sky2316
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I took a sneak peak of your latest chapter. And I can see some noticeable improvements in your writing. If you ever write a new book, I will be sure to read it.
Sky2316:If you're talking about the two bits in the first chapter, it's portraying a text from a child. Children and even most adults misspell things when texting. I even typed in a paragraph comment to relay the actual words. If you're talking about something else, point me in the chapter where it's 'too much' :)
If you're talking about the two bits in the first chapter, it's portraying a text from a child. Children and even most adults misspell things when texting. I even typed in a paragraph comment to relay the actual words. If you're talking about something else, point me in the chapter where it's 'too much' :)
No, it wasn't the child that I refereed to. It is the way you structure your sentences that threw me off. Again I bet your story is great, but unfortunately it's difficult for me to read when bad grammar structure keeps appearing.
Sky2316:If you're talking about the two bits in the first chapter, it's portraying a text from a child. Children and even most adults misspell things when texting. I even typed in a paragraph comment to relay the actual words. If you're talking about something else, point me in the chapter where it's 'too much' :)
timmyboy:No, it wasn't the child that I refereed to. It is the way you structure your sentences that threw me off. Again I bet your story is great, but unfortunately it's difficult for me to read when bad grammar structure keeps appearing.