Review Detail of Kamilaroi_warrior in Uchiha/DC

When writing your character do not make your character to op very fast with time skip like add training chapters and talk about if he can he summing contract from naruto

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Bit late,but I think you should look over comma rules,and also remember that sometimes you fill story gaps in your head,and you need to remember that we might not read it as you do.For example,there are a few run on sentences that you read as if there were commas.You also need to watch out for comma splicing.I know a-lot of this is me talking about commas but it looks better when you add them.