They're at the most basic form so I'm not opposed to the perks

If she gets an appolyon class or xk/zk class scp I think she wins

Willy Wonka at day batman at night!

I saw an emogi and let me just say,dont overuse emojis to convey emotions. It's annoying to read someone's book who spams emojis to convey expressions instead of just,you know......... writing?

Bit late,but I think you should look over comma rules,and also remember that sometimes you fill story gaps in your head,and you need to remember that we might not read it as you do.For example,there are a few run on sentences that you read as if there were commas.You also need to watch out for comma splicing.I know a-lot of this is me talking about commas but it looks better when you add them.