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Review Detail of NeftaroWruter in Murder on the Orient Express

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Okay,that was kind of a cliffhanger that I both like and dislike, given the ******* of the story, despite it remaining unresolved, it seems. Firstly, I like the build up of the story and the conflict to discover the clues and answers, the characters are somewhat decent. However I have a few major gripes with the story, Firstly its sometimes jumble up dialogue that really irritates me with confusion when I see, like, put some space and dont jumble it togother. Second, I also dislike the major info dump of one of the chapter 31, like i get the information must be detailed given it was a scene of deduction of analysis, but add some spice to it cuz it was a drag to go through it. Finally, I hope you can continue and give us the answer, if not, then I dislike this cliffhanger. You should try and improve your writing my guy.

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