Yep, if you want omnipotent, omniscient, flawless, the luckiest and the most powerfull MC then you won't find him here. To judge MC after only one day in a new world has passed is kinda weird, what did you expect? That he would have already killed Demon King and screwed his daughter? I try to be nice to all opinions but it's getting frustrating that everyone rushes in and expects MC to have IQ 9000 when he was just random unlucky Joe on Earth.

How is the MC a beta? He’s just a normal guy who’s had an unfortunate life and is trying to make the best of what he’s been dealt with. Also with the unlucky part, the title literally says MC is an unfortunate guy and combine that with a comedy story there’s bound to be one or two “pathetic” (aka comedic/unfortunate) events to occur. Although those get sorted out later and misunderstandings are generally cleared up one way or another so far.

That's my opinion dude. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, just dropping cuz it's not my type after leaving this comment.

I felt frustrated when I was answering you so sorry if I sounded harsh. You are free to like whatever you want but you graded my entire work as 1.5 star just by judging MC when the criteria are not only about the MC but also things like update speed or writing quality. Characters and the world background might not be my ideas entirely but in those two criterias I also think 1.5 stars is a harsh statement. Have a nice day.

novel has action, op mc? XD

Your type is the worst then •_•

And your grammar suck

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Okay. It's not like I'm denying my type.

Thanks you save me on wasting my time on this trashy Novel with so called good development lol

I understand people have their own taste in books and character developement, but i can't help but think you judged this fanfiction a bit harsh. This is especially true since you dropped the fanfiction at chapter 7. Would you say that Harry Potter is a bad book because he is an "unlucky af, beta and pathetic MC" or that naruto is an "unlucky af, beta and pathetic MC?" For both of these series, the character started with those traits, but flourished into amazing series due to later character developement. Im not criticizing your taste or your review, but hope that you could give this fanfiction another chance. Or, if this sort of fanfiction isn't fit for your taste to begin with, please judge the nonstory based elements, such as the update consistency or writing quality fairly. I definately enjoyed this fanfiction and couldn't bare to see such a low review, which could turn other readers away from this fanfiction. Thank you.

Stupid and boring idea for a novel thanks anyway

I can agree he was a beta at the beginning. But seriously anyone would be like that if they wake up naked in the middle of a city. After that arc the story gets better.