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Review Detail of Felthat in Child of Destiny

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Felthat
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So, while the story is mostly enjoyable, I have been having trouble with the mindset of the MC. he was raised as an assassin. From 3 years old. While I don't know what a child assassin mindset would be like...I would assume he was trained to be patient, listen, be aware, take in information before acting, and would generally be colder and more indifferent to people. Unfortunately, while he has his moments of brilliance in planning and fighting, his overall attitude, intelligence, social perception, and thoughtfulness are equivalent to some of the worst Japanese isekai protagonist s I have ever read. In other words...he's dumber than a baked potato. Then there are the side characters...everyone has this laissez faire, forgetful attitude that makes it near impossible to treat all but a few of the characters with any sort of seriousness...no matter their importance or power level. That, and the translation quality make me rate this book lower than it could be.

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Child of Destiny

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ProudMonkey
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Kakakaka... Thanks for the honest review... I want to answer for first concern about the MC's mindset but that will spoil some important things that needed to be discuss for the future chapters.. All I can say is 'There is a reason for that'.... Kakakakakaka... And it will take a little time for it to be revealed.. so please stay with us and discover what it will be,,,, Kakakakakaka

JPNovelFan
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Author: The mc is a total idiot but trust me there are “reasons”. Aka, “please keep reading because I’m a bad author that can’t develop a proper personality for my characters based on the background story I wrote for them.” I haven’t even read this novel yet but that one comment just made me not even want to bother.

ProudMonkey:Kakakaka... Thanks for the honest review... I want to answer for first concern about the MC's mindset but that will spoil some important things that needed to be discuss for the future chapters.. All I can say is 'There is a reason for that'.... Kakakakakaka... And it will take a little time for it to be revealed.. so please stay with us and discover what it will be,,,, Kakakakakaka
ProudMonkey
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Kakakakakaka.. it is fine if you don't want to.. it is just I don't want to spoil why his personality is different from what is it use to be... some of my readers already get it somehow as they read bit by bit.... but if you guys are just asking for some free candy then I can't do anything about it....

JPNovelFan:Author: The mc is a total idiot but trust me there are “reasons”. Aka, “please keep reading because I’m a bad author that can’t develop a proper personality for my characters based on the background story I wrote for them.” I haven’t even read this novel yet but that one comment just made me not even want to bother.
ShibaTatsuya786
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He's good compared to dumb protagonists I've seen. He's not even dumb, you know some people also hide their trauma and some can be better at recovering from trauma.

Yatendouij
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he has a reason to be an idiot which is to be an idiot hahahaha there is no way an idiot not to be an idiot. 😂😂😂😂

JPNovelFan:Author: The mc is a total idiot but trust me there are “reasons”. Aka, “please keep reading because I’m a bad author that can’t develop a proper personality for my characters based on the background story I wrote for them.” I haven’t even read this novel yet but that one comment just made me not even want to bother.
Omkar_M_7463
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author laughing be like:

ProudMonkey:Kakakaka... Thanks for the honest review... I want to answer for first concern about the MC's mindset but that will spoil some important things that needed to be discuss for the future chapters.. All I can say is 'There is a reason for that'.... Kakakakakaka... And it will take a little time for it to be revealed.. so please stay with us and discover what it will be,,,, Kakakakakaka
Omkar_M_7463
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#2 Author laughing be like:

ProudMonkey:Kakakakakaka.. it is fine if you don't want to.. it is just I don't want to spoil why his personality is different from what is it use to be... some of my readers already get it somehow as they read bit by bit.... but if you guys are just asking for some free candy then I can't do anything about it....