It is not Very often that a work such as this is found amongst the trash heap on this platform, most stories that have potential are relagated to obscurity by the site in itself, that said it makes it all the better when a story such as this is unearthed and given its dues such as this, that being said the dedication of the readers and the budding brilliance of the author is admirable, especially so in that the author chose one of the most difficult works to base his story in, the story has a large amount of potential, the untapped source improving upon the already good design, the characters have some development over their originals but their is more to be seen so i cannot properly judge, the background has been improved immensely, however their is more to be seen, over all i give this story a 4.6 out of five, a exellent score for the author.
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