Review Detail of BAKumi in What is a Genetic Vampire?

Item: What is a Genetic Vampire?
Rating: 4.4

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The book has the potential. When reading i found not much miatakes but its like no description of Igor and Massie which should have been in the First chapter. I love it by the way....

What is a Genetic Vampire?

Sapphire_Ace

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Sapphire_AceAuthorSapphire_Ace

thanks, I could fix that I have a description of Igor in the second chapter

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Sapphire_AceAuthorSapphire_Ace

i have descriptions littered in a few chapters but I know I probably should do that when introducing them. originally I had written this story in high school, my first attempt at a longer story.

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Sapphire_AceAuthorSapphire_Ace

hey 👋 I fixed every character's description in the first chapter. if you're interested in knowing what they look like 😜

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