right I saw that you can add characters on here

honestly I've edited this thing so many times over the years and it's just little things like that I need another set of eyes for!

oh okay 👌 one person mentioned I repeated the same words a lot 🥴

Which words were repeated where exactly, that would be helpful to know.

The story has very vivid imagery, is a decent story about reincarnation and Gods

wow 😂

Hello Author,The book is super intriguing. I am enjoying reading it! Anyways, my minor criticisms were, the name of the story is kind of less catchy or interesting, and another thing was that I cannot exactly tell what your characters look like.

was he imprisoned for being an emperor they wanted to overthrow

thank you, any criticisms? that would be super helpful

Hey so I was having difficulty reading this as it needs to be edited for some flow issues. You need to fix some of the grammar, the sentences tend to flow together. The quotations are confusing the way they are written too.

Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.

thank you 😊

reminds me of shield hero except he didn't really know the other heroes really

what candy bar is shaped like a thumbs up

in the same boat

nerd

this kind of reminds me of the differences in the book called brave new world between the alphas and betas.

I mean it's historical 'fiction'

oh nice real history, I love when people incorporate real facts