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Writing is neat and good choices of words that could easily understand by the readers. The narration took a bit serious in the beginning but the author made sure to explain his/her ideas about the plotline, it is quite descriptive in fact, though long sentences sometimes bores the eyes, the story piques interest! A good read, keep up the work dear author!🌟👏👏

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What is a Genetic Vampire?

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Thank you for your review, I will probably fix the overall structure between paragraphs, I realize because it's not an actual novel it's a light novel, ebook kind of thing (a literal web novel) people want the paragraphs to have more breaks