I'm not serious when it comes to writing quality, but it was hard to read. The mc is plain and the set of family goal is questionable because most of the people he takes in are not in need at all. I get create a family, but this ain't it, its like taking in rich kids because you feel like making a family. World background:animals worlds he travels upon. stability is alright. Story development is weird, Pretty plain. I usually never write bad reviews but this went downhill. But it is decent to pass the time. His powers are cool doe. I might have been harsh, still thank you for the novel.
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