THIS IS TO GOOD PLEASE COME READ IT GIVE YOUR STONES SO THAT HE WILL GIVE MORE CHAPTER AND MORE CHAPTER IS BETTER FOR ME MHUAHAHHAHA !! This story is really good the plot is intressting the charater are good the writing is good the world background is good i just want more chapter :3 Go see it it worth it !! ^^

Nice story and I like Sora personality, bad grammar here and there, not perfect but I still gave it 5 stars, because I believe in its potential. 👍👍👍👍👍 Keep updating~! -----------------------------⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐-------------------------------

Great novel please dont drop as long as you don't drop I will keep feeding it power stones Great novel please dont drop as long as you don't drop I will keep feeding it power stones

so basically mc will babysit some dudes and girls and let them makes family among themselves then he will leave for the so-called higher realms. Drop this. I'm out. Thanks for wasting my time.

This guy is a brat. He whines a lot. He gets what he wants through shortcuts but still have the guts to proclaim himself as if he is a hero who got through trials of epic proportions. The **** right? All he did was kill some goblins and exercise a lot and boom! He's op!! Delusional ****!

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Everything is almost free for mc with too little effort next what is he gonna become "young master".??? There is too much distance between Mc and main world storyline

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I'm not serious when it comes to writing quality, but it was hard to read. The mc is plain and the set of family goal is questionable because most of the people he takes in are not in need at all. I get create a family, but this ain't it, its like taking in rich kids because you feel like making a family. World background:animals worlds he travels upon. stability is alright. Story development is weird, Pretty plain. I usually never write bad reviews but this went downhill. But it is decent to pass the time. His powers are cool doe. I might have been harsh, still thank you for the novel.