DuncanIneau

You should really correct that, its so utterly confusing when it's written bull and cow when it's mammoth. Please 🙏

yes its a small mistake

But its only cat mask so its still in the Uchiha style (You are right by the way its just that if it where all kind of animals or faceless it would bother me but, cat masks im ok with that, its a trad dont nitpick everything)

Hey ! You juggle too much between the frost steel sword and the glass sword with Janessa witch one she got ? Both maybe ?

2 weeks since jiraya died due to poison lmao

Urg I need to wait again... you don't have a thingy account for early release for mony not ? Whats called ? Patron or something ?

I really am happy you read my story. I couldn't because too much critics on every detail, even if they are right im not that strong to endure it sorry.

If its to bite him in the ass later, he shoulds have acted like he failed to stop him jumping the canyon or whatever it was and let him die. Its the only thing i think is a plot hole becasue remember et blown the head of Micka who was a problem but he knew Dutch was one too. Lettin him die was the best solution why didn't he act on that ? I dont like that.

Why does it feel never enough? No really man the story is fire. And always at the end of the chapter makes me feel desperate for more and disappointed it's the end... good work mate.

I didn't know not having a daily chapter even the sorry not today would make me feel that weird. Must say that story is on my everyday to do list since a couple month I read it.