Review Detail of theblocshop in Is that a Wisp?

My main gripe with the story however is grammar, spelling, and phrasing. The first 20 chapters or so weren't terrible, you can definitely read passed them. Minor errors are expected on a platform that you are requires to release a chapter or two a day to be popular. The issue is the latest chapters. They read like a poorly translated novel. If they can be edited to at least the same standard of the previous chapters, I wouldn't have a problem. That being said, I do think this can reach the top ranks of Web Novel given time. The story draws you in quickly even with all it's tropes and deadpan humor. I do think to get their the writer will have to make sure to maintain the standard of the writing they've done so far as well as hopefully going back and fixing grammar issues overtime