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theblocshop

theblocshop

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Previously an avid reader, the web novel medium is letting me get back into it without having to change my schedule.

2019-10-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • theblocshop
    theblocshop2mth
    Posted

    An arsed book unfortunately. In all seriousness I just couldn't get passed "arsed" in every other paragraph. Extrenely repeated words are jarring and moreso uncommom ones. I liked where it was going but it was to annoying to read.

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    Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination
    Fantasy · Suezaro
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  • theblocshop
    theblocshop3mth
    Commented

    I think it would be great if you avoided sound affects and instead described them

    TAATATATAAA!!! {SFX: paws beating on the lightly snowed ground}.
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    EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
    Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
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  • theblocshop
    theblocshop7mth
    Commented

    For a room to yourself, that is still very bbry comfortable. 49sqm is around 500sqft!

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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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