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ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv114yr
2020-04-12 04:03

I’m caught up with the Translations. It had a decent start at first. But it quickly becomes more and more disappointing. Clearly this story is not well thought. There is Tragedy after tragedy. I have no idea what the freak going on! Also Heroine said she did not want a extra person in their relationship. Yet then she says she can’t imagine how many concubines he’ll have in the future and pinches him. All of this was done in one chapter. It’s just really forced man. Even the System been utterly useless and I don’t see this being a long-run novel.

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Nagakoro
NagakoroLv4

What’s the tragedy?

Xajaud
XajaudLv14

Prolly his niggas and hoes dying

Nagakoro:What’s the tragedy?
Zayah
ZayahLv15

Bruh

Xajaud:Prolly his niggas and hoes dying
Hahalool
HahaloolLv14

TRU DOU

Xajaud:Prolly his niggas and hoes dying
_Felix_
_Felix_Lv13

Really did happen then?

Hahalool:TRU DOU
Hahalool
HahaloolLv14

Nan im jus replying to a fellow cultivator’s opinion 💩

_Felix_:Really did happen then?
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

In the 60 chapters, I've seen about 4 'tragedies' : - mother dying and MC pursued - villain capture the mc and sister - enemy find MC - bandit capture sister The System is useless? What a joke it gives extremely overpowered weapons (that can be controlled through telekinesis), items and skills. The girl is illogical? I don't see how, she doesn't want MC to have another girl but she knows that he'll have many concubine due to his talent, you're illogical yo be unable to understand. Making this comment is to show how illogical and stupid your review is, 0/10 too much stupidity.

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

The guy caught up with the translations.... There are novels that starts good then became sh*t later on. And what's the point of having the so called OP system when it'll be full of tragedy....

XinYuhao:In the 60 chapters, I've seen about 4 'tragedies' : - mother dying and MC pursued - villain capture the mc and sister - enemy find MC - bandit capture sister The System is useless? What a joke it gives extremely overpowered weapons (that can be controlled through telekinesis), items and skills. The girl is illogical? I don't see how, she doesn't want MC to have another girl but she knows that he'll have many concubine due to his talent, you're illogical yo be unable to understand. Making this comment is to show how illogical and stupid your review is, 0/10 too much stupidity.
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

He said Translations... I haven't found any translator that translated this except for MTL so... Still the reviewer unable to be clear and concise. Also, I didn't say the system was OP, I said that it gave OP sword and skills.

Chunchunmaru_sama:The guy caught up with the translations.... There are novels that starts good then became sh*t later on. And what's the point of having the so called OP system when it'll be full of tragedy....
OneOddK1dd
OneOddK1ddLv15

Just because harems and concubines exist within a culture doesn't mean that it's mandatory to have one. It's still a conscious decision to have multiple partners. And the reason behind the logic of harems and concubines was to leave behind an heir or multiple heirs not just for s e x... So having one of your partners saying that they don't want to share and then being ok with concubines is a bit offputting. Like the guy just didnt care to listen to her feelings.

XinYuhao:In the 60 chapters, I've seen about 4 'tragedies' : - mother dying and MC pursued - villain capture the mc and sister - enemy find MC - bandit capture sister The System is useless? What a joke it gives extremely overpowered weapons (that can be controlled through telekinesis), items and skills. The girl is illogical? I don't see how, she doesn't want MC to have another girl but she knows that he'll have many concubine due to his talent, you're illogical yo be unable to understand. Making this comment is to show how illogical and stupid your review is, 0/10 too much stupidity.
HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

Did you forget that she was almost sold to a brothel? Or she somehow almost died at the Inn? The ones you've mentioned where just the most significant events. It's all to convenient. The System is useless. He has more then enough swords to deal with, he's unable to use them all & I'm sure most readers wont even remember half of them. All the Techniques he got is mostly for himself and somehow he's unable to give the Heroine any useful techniques as she has no talent in the sword. (She just wasted several years on minor techniques she has no talent for) I understand a 'obstacle' is needed for Heroine but that's just incompetent writing. Have you read "I am the great devil"? You can practically tell what this Author was trying to do but at least in "Great Devil" the system was actually useful! I'm sure there are other system novels much better executed as well

XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

She doesn't seem ok with it, she just knows how it's going to end that's like when you say something but unconsciously you know that the opposite is going to happen

OneOddK1dd:Just because harems and concubines exist within a culture doesn't mean that it's mandatory to have one. It's still a conscious decision to have multiple partners. And the reason behind the logic of harems and concubines was to leave behind an heir or multiple heirs not just for s e x... So having one of your partners saying that they don't want to share and then being ok with concubines is a bit offputting. Like the guy just didnt care to listen to her feelings.
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

Wait so you expected the System to actually help the Heroine and not the MC... I won't even comment on that

HolyDragon17:Did you forget that she was almost sold to a brothel? Or she somehow almost died at the Inn? The ones you've mentioned where just the most significant events. It's all to convenient. The System is useless. He has more then enough swords to deal with, he's unable to use them all & I'm sure most readers wont even remember half of them. All the Techniques he got is mostly for himself and somehow he's unable to give the Heroine any useful techniques as she has no talent in the sword. (She just wasted several years on minor techniques she has no talent for) I understand a 'obstacle' is needed for Heroine but that's just incompetent writing. Have you read "I am the great devil"? You can practically tell what this Author was trying to do but at least in "Great Devil" the system was actually useful! I'm sure there are other system novels much better executed as well
DailyReadz
DailyReadzLv3

Dam these Chinese niggas and their bulshjt stories, Always come up wiv the randomest ideas. Smh 🤦

Poka_kun
Poka_kunLv14

Tragedies make a story exciting

Chunchunmaru_sama:The guy caught up with the translations.... There are novels that starts good then became sh*t later on. And what's the point of having the so called OP system when it'll be full of tragedy....
RedLaw
RedLawLv13

Hum. Did anything happen to the sister?

XinYuhao:In the 60 chapters, I've seen about 4 'tragedies' : - mother dying and MC pursued - villain capture the mc and sister - enemy find MC - bandit capture sister The System is useless? What a joke it gives extremely overpowered weapons (that can be controlled through telekinesis), items and skills. The girl is illogical? I don't see how, she doesn't want MC to have another girl but she knows that he'll have many concubine due to his talent, you're illogical yo be unable to understand. Making this comment is to show how illogical and stupid your review is, 0/10 too much stupidity.
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

Nope, but I'm pretty sure I forgot another tragedy so I make up for it with this random one

RedLaw:Hum. Did anything happen to the sister?
X10A_FREEDOM
X10A_FREEDOMLv14

Fyi stupid, his mother death were not confirm yet.

DarkMystra
DarkMystraLv3

Haha

XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

FYI, retard, it was pretty much confirmed if not for Plot armor then the mother is dead or she hated her skn

X10A_FREEDOM:Fyi stupid, his mother death were not confirm yet.
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