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Emilly_y
Emilly_yLv109mth
2024-07-04 20:08

The writing is immature, the characters are superficial, the plot is lacking a lot, there is a lot of repetition of things like my king my queen, everything is very accelerated, for example in 3 days they are already swearing their love and the problem is not just in the relationship of the main characters but other characters are liking other people at the same speed or changing their personalities even faster. All of this could be ignored because the author said it was his first book but the problem is that the author starts selling the book, and the book is terrible and the author himself recognizes this, this makes it seem like he just wants to make easy money and it doesn't improve to deliver something of quality and worth buying.

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LeahCollins
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Okay, so let me give a very honest review here. When I started this book a few months back, I dropped it not long after because of the writing quality and grammatical errors. But there was something about this book and author that didn't let me completely abandon it. I still had this in my library. And I couldn't control myself from reading it again when I saw a lot of chapter updates. To my pleasant surprise, the author has improved her grammar, and included with her amazing writing style, it makes the whole thing so beautiful and it's really worth it.. As I see it, the previous chapters are on the editing process too.. Let me get to the story, we get to see Tang Li, the FL as a strong and cold CEO but the twist is that she can be a fox at times. As for Mo Yuhan, the ML, he is like the demon Emperor....errr... everyone is so froghtened my him..He is cold and ruthless to the point that people call him an iceberg and devil.. But the devil innocently got abducted by a certain fox, that is our FL... Like a lamb who is waiting to be slaughtered, he got coaxed to marry her. When it comes to her, he is nothing like himself, he becomes soft hearted and helpless, a complete doting husband. Moreover, we get to see an overprotective brother of our FL who falls for ML's sister while always cursing the ML for stealing his sister. It has that mystery essence, ther is no rape or major misunderstanding, doting husbands, 4-5 couples are there I guess, all fluffy, sometimes romantic, sometimes erotic and have adequate snu snu ... I love this novel....This is like a hidden gem...πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ Keep the superb work going on,....By the way, little author, I must say you're a big fan of Trial Marriage Husband, aren't you?πŸ˜ΈπŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ₯°

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