Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in Canceled book ^_^
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Story ain't that great. Who wishes for makin boos powers and turns into a useless blob? And when he wakes up the first thing he wanna do is kill someone. Also when confronted with a criminal he forgets he has powers. Haha. It's not the worst I have ever seen but the others I knew were trash from the beginning. This one is disappointing because you take it serious in the beginning so it can be trash just one chapter later.
Canceled book ^_^
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If you don't like this Then you'll probably like my DC fanfiction, DC: The Dragon's Head. There is only 11 chapters currently, but it has just as many words as this one and less mistakes. This was my first work , so I didn't exactly know what I was doing. I'm actually completely rewriting the entire series. There will be new wishes and better characters.
I'll check it out then. I mean I liked the story. Pretty sure it would get better later on, but I like many others on this website tend to run away from novels that don't start off strong.
TalentlessAuthor:If you don't like this Then you'll probably like my DC fanfiction, DC: The Dragon's Head. There is only 11 chapters currently, but it has just as many words as this one and less mistakes. This was my first work , so I didn't exactly know what I was doing. I'm actually completely rewriting the entire series. There will be new wishes and better characters.
The_Young_Flash:I'll check it out then. I mean I liked the story. Pretty sure it would get better later on, but I like many others on this website tend to run away from novels that don't start off strong.