Review Detail of Nameless_Godless in Canceled book ^_^

What a novel should do my mind novels should First 10 Chapters - Draw the users attention and keep it while introducing basic elements. Basically the equivalent of putting something shiny in someone's face. The first 5 chapter completely failed at this the pre new life content was overly dragged out to the point I felt like I was reading a script for a bad reality tv which was pretty jarring because I went in expecting a fantasy novel the wishes were okay with the more interesting one being the Buu powers this was dragged down by the mood set by the previously mentioned point I ended up stopping at this point because this I just had other thing to read that grab my attention more and not enough room for everything on my time table. Fast forward a month later I rediscovered the novel and gave it another try the latter half of the first ten chapter were much better not enough to be great as some parts felt padded or like filler but did a better job nonetheless. Unfortunately I still had other things to read but seeing the improvement I kept in my library where it eventually got buried under other stories. Some time later I noticed a pattern of the author complaing on certain storys about a choice or something and shortly after that story gaining gaining a clearly alt account review that was negative with very little criticism I just waved it off as a coincidence or the author having similar taste to the alt spammer but an author I know ended up mentioning that someone was using an alt to lower his rating so he went digging and thought it was this author same as me so I went this story reviews and find tons of alts with 5 star reviews so it's most likely the author using them.... or a creepy stalker who knows anyways First 25 chapters - The goal is to introduce and build the groundwork for characters and arcs. Nothing bad to say about the character other than feeling fake and forced sometimes not too bad. The arc set up on the otherhand was done pretty messily the author just tried to introduce too many points at once pretty common mistake among fics about composite universe this massive like marvel massive reveals could happen slightly later making them have more impact while characters were built more as that seems to be this storys strong suit the author doesn't copy and paste characters he make them new and unique while also being recognizable. Like all my reviews at 3.5 star has potential and I suggest you read it yourself as you might feel entirely different to I do. ..... Ned is an absolute chad and is clearly the One Above All in disguise