Review Detail of Brian_Fisher in Canceled book ^_^
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Love the story hope you dont drop it like EVERY other author. Loved your protrail of one above all. On chapter 4 now so for I have a few issues about his wishes 1 you said something along lines of merging soul with his body great okay -what happens when his body dies does his soul die with it. 2 if his soul doesn't die and he is reincarnated with all memories intacked then that is just as bad if not worse than nothingness, what happens when he is reincarnated back to (our) earth but with knowledge of thousands nd thousand lifetimes what can he do-by now he wouldn't have his other abilities other than his own universal space 3 you wished for him to be bitten by the spider to become spiderman, then wished for him to have majin busa powers (downgraded) - why swing on a web when majin can fly, he is imperious to bullets and bombs and has greater strength even when downgraded than spiderman. Also only good power of spiderman has in this scenario is sensing danger which is great and all but it's only a few seconds before danger strikes. Author please respond.
Canceled book ^_^
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I think flying is lame. I downgraded him because I didn't want him to blast through the marvel universe on easy mode. I also went with the body and soul thing because it would keep his memories ingrained in him which in turn expands his compacity for them the stronger he get. Lastly, I can't tell you why I chose to make the decision to add that wish because it will be revealed in the future.
I think flying is lame. I downgraded him because I didn't want him to blast through the marvel universe on easy mode. I also went with the body and soul thing because it would keep his memories ingrained in him which in turn expands his compacity for them the stronger he get. Lastly, I can't tell you why I chose to make the decision to add that wish because it will be revealed in the future.
