Review Detail of HeNNaYatsu in Journey To Become A True God

2nd review: The grammar (translation?) gets better. The character behavior/development improves slightly. But the grammar/writing becomes more annoying. I will make some examples: "You are very beautiful" said Ye Chen telling Nangong Xiang is very beautiful. "This food is very good" said Ye Chen praising Li Jingyi food is very good. "Go f*** yourself" said the reader telling the author to go f*** himself. You get the point...stop repeating yourself. Not sure if this is a language barrier thing or the author is shamelessly trying to increase the word count. There are still a lot of misuse of pronoun...he, she, him, and her....its not very difficult is it? Maybe this is a machine translation error? Anyways....besides these annoyances, the story does get better, but it takes a long time...like after ch 800 is when the author gets his s*** together.