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Review Detail of Senior_Black in Journey To Become A True God

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Senior_Black
Senior_BlackLv133yrSenior_Black

Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.

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Journey To Become A True God

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Senior_Black
Senior_BlackLv13Senior_Black

*sigh* its really bad.

Senior_Black
Senior_BlackLv13Senior_Black

*sigh* its really bad.

Dr987
Dr987Lv2Dr987

I think he is writting his story in "indonesia language" and then use google translate to share it with us

Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

Ah! But the irony behind the theme of a guy feeling down at being cheated on while collecting a harem,,,