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Review Detail of AllGoodNamesRGone in Journey To Become A True God

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AllGoodNamesRGone
AllGoodNamesRGoneLv134yrAllGoodNamesRGone

The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.

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Journey To Become A True God

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Higher_Being
Higher_BeingLv14Higher_Being

Exactly, and you never know if its a guy or a girl talking because it mostly says he or him.

Evach_sch
Evach_schLv2Evach_sch

Я согласен

Random_Asian
Random_AsianLv3Random_Asian

Comrade

Evach_sch:Я согласен
Kvxzxvb_Jbbv
Kvxzxvb_JbbvLv1Kvxzxvb_Jbbv

exactly

Donovan_Kaye
Donovan_KayeLv11Donovan_Kaye

Tbh even mtl isn't this bad.. I've read a lot of mtl novels but you could still get a grasp here it tells you the uncle walks to the village when it's the Mc walking to the village like wtf

Jagesa
JagesaLv10Jagesa

its because that author using translation machine

TwilightStorm
TwilightStormLv4TwilightStorm

Grammer is really bad here

DaoistMKAOS0
DaoistMKAOS0Lv11DaoistMKAOS0

i have one question , is there any yuri when the girls went to the bath , did Chu molest them ?

kamehgahskiida
kamehgahskiidaLv11kamehgahskiida

you need extreme patience and wild imagination to understand the story lmao

Medoshi_Senpai
Medoshi_SenpaiLv4Medoshi_Senpai

hello I'm someone who last read this novel long ago. I just want to confirm if the grammar problem has been taken of

Rajeev_Ranjan_5511
Rajeev_Ranjan_5511Lv1Rajeev_Ranjan_5511

Comment for free bricks

SubZ
SubZLv4SubZ

Do you know the original novel's name? I would honestly rather read mtl than this dude's interpretation of it

Jagesa:its because that author using translation machine
Sakura_Li_5915
Sakura_Li_5915Lv15Sakura_Li_5915

Honestly if you still struggle to edit id ve glad to help you edit it, it might not be perfect but it’ll be better

Seishiro
SeishiroLv15Seishiro

so anyone know if the translation gets better? the basis of the story seemed interesting but I'm not paying for really bad translation.

Cosmic
CosmicLv15Cosmic

he just need a good editor then it would become a precious work of literacy

Chen_Richard
Chen_RichardLv1Chen_Richard

you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.

Cheek_Destroyah_87
Cheek_Destroyah_87Lv2Cheek_Destroyah_87

Товарищ

Evach_sch:Я согласен
Yinpi
YinpiLv1Yinpi

I can read chinese but I can't find it

Chen_Richard:you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.
ahumanintheworld
ahumanintheworldLv2ahumanintheworld

Exp

Sameer_Khan_6478
Sameer_Khan_6478Lv12Sameer_Khan_6478

what's is Chinese name of this novel

Chen_Richard:you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.