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Cepheus_7439Lv44yr
2021-03-26 16:05

As you have read the reviews you would know that the grammar is terrible but it is not enough for the low rating. there are many issues with the novel. The strat was nice but things downgrade quickly. He gets his 1st girlfriend within a day who also accepts all the things he says such as cultivation. She also quickly comes to the fact that he needs a lot more women. She doesn’t seem to be reluctant about it and even actively finds more girls for him. This happens very quickly that itis unreal. All the following characters are similar. They are like ‘I can’t accept sharing.’ Then ‘reluctantly’ accept due to his body which requires more women then bam...they also actively search for new ‘sisters’. All beautiful women he comes across are gonna emd up with him. We cannot even distinguish between them. There is no character development and the world building is horrble. There is no story or struggle. The novel is basically a collection of cliches.

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reincarnation_end
reincarnation_endLv4

I survived until chapter 211 hoping it would get better but after your reassurance I cannot help but give up this novel characters all seem to be forced to act without conscience even the MC is like that

reincarnation_end
reincarnation_endLv4

*after give up there is a period (.)

reincarnation_end:I survived until chapter 211 hoping it would get better but after your reassurance I cannot help but give up this novel characters all seem to be forced to act without conscience even the MC is like that
kingkong1
kingkong1Lv13

it's a copy of against the gods the cultivation realms the body which gives resistance to all elements same

reincarnation_end:*after give up there is a period (.)
J_K_5940
J_K_5940Lv1

nah i read up till 2k chaps even tho i skipping some chapters and you know what? NOTHING IMPROVE BROTHER the grammar still trash, the plot trash, the way MC get women is giving me brainrot, overall? PURE TRASH, i consider myself stupid reading till 2k chapter

reincarnation_end:*after give up there is a period (.)
J_K_5940
J_K_5940Lv1

if i can give minus review this trash probably going on minus 5

reincarnation_end
reincarnation_endLv4

don't worry brother, we have all been there. Your braincells suffered long enough, they need a rest.

J_K_5940:nah i read up till 2k chaps even tho i skipping some chapters and you know what? NOTHING IMPROVE BROTHER the grammar still trash, the plot trash, the way MC get women is giving me brainrot, overall? PURE TRASH, i consider myself stupid reading till 2k chapter
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