The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.
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Exactly, and you never know if its a guy or a girl talking because it mostly says he or him.
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exactly
Tbh even mtl isn't this bad.. I've read a lot of mtl novels but you could still get a grasp here it tells you the uncle walks to the village when it's the Mc walking to the village like wtf
its because that author using translation machine
Grammer is really bad here
i have one question , is there any yuri when the girls went to the bath , did Chu molest them ?
you need extreme patience and wild imagination to understand the story lmao
hello I'm someone who last read this novel long ago. I just want to confirm if the grammar problem has been taken of
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Do you know the original novel's name? I would honestly rather read mtl than this dude's interpretation of it
Honestly if you still struggle to edit id ve glad to help you edit it, it might not be perfect but it’ll be better
so anyone know if the translation gets better? the basis of the story seemed interesting but I'm not paying for really bad translation.
he just need a good editor then it would become a precious work of literacy
you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.
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I can read chinese but I can't find it
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what's is Chinese name of this novel
