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Midnights_Slave
Midnights_SlaveLv134yr
2020-10-17 20:29

Absolutely terrible grammar. Regardless of how good your ideas may be I cannot read this trash. I recommend you hire an editor for your work. Machine translated novels are easier to read than your work. This is the novel's standard. So fellow readers who can read this novel you have my praise. I tried reading all of the first few chapters but I could not handle the bad grammar. If you cannot read it everything get's one star.

Journey To Become A True God

DarkForces
4.3
3923 Chs

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AllGoodNamesRGone
AllGoodNamesRGoneLv13

The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.

5yr

Shady41
Shady41Lv5

Cant understand crap the dang thing is machine translated or something. I gived up trying to read this in the 2nd chapter. The MC's is pretty much generic guy who goes on the path of power for the generic reason of saving his life. I dont hate it and would have read it through but the grammer kills it for me.

5yr
Nyxarias
NyxariasLv5

The Fuck??????? Cant understand **** here .... sometimes its he sometimes its she or at the beginning i found a boyfriend and my girlfriends name is ... WTF!!!!! learn at least not to confound the genders all the fucking TIME!!!! and the overall this novel is TRASH..........................................................................

5yr
Bonjoel
BonjoelLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
HajimexYue
HajimexYueLv11

The authors English is very poor and it’s really hard to read chapters. The auntie updates regularly but never responds to comments so far everything is very cliche and the world building is almost non existent it feels like the author is trying to cram a bunch of cliches together and hope fans like it.

5yr
NewManagement
NewManagementLv5

If you can figure out what the author is talking about it seems good. The issue is you have to Reread everything because you can figure out who is talking or what they are talking about. Horrible grammar..... MTL would be better in all honesty

5yr
waVee
waVeeLv2

Amazing Amazing Very Amazing CLap CLap Clap Right? Right? Guys! Agree with me! Ezz Amazing isn't it? LEt those others Trash talk And lezz just give an amazing Review Right?

4yr
BrokenBrain
BrokenBrainLv2

The novel is good but the grammar is fucking ****! .........................................................................................

5yr
Oto
OtoLv14

Imagine being a someone working for Webnovel and thinking that this piece of trash should go premium, let alone privilege. You would think they would consider an editor lmao. Just goes to show what a site run by some English-illiterate Chinese looks like.

4yr
Ahs_549
Ahs_549Lv4

The Grammar is so terrible. I was genuinely interested but just couldn't continue after chapter 2 so if the Grammar is not corrected, a story with such good potential will be hard to read

4yr
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