Review Detail of Thutmose in Brightest Doom

I love the story. Within just three chapters you’ve done really well in creating a world and active characters. The story does revolve around Doom, but the heroes and villains react to him and it doesn’t come across as passive. I recommend this story to anyone he sees this review. There are only three chapters at the time of this response but the length of them is feels like twenty, which is great. The story itself is well written, not too many grammatical mistakes and for this website that is saying something. I like the pacing of the story. The chapters are long but the pacing is consistent. I real wanna see how Doom grows as a character and how the characters(villains) around him grow and change as well. I have one question though. Will he have a steady relationship with Ivy and Cheetah or is this gonna be harem? I just hope it doesn’t go too far. I’m not to sure about an update schedule. I just hope the story get finished.Thanks for the story and great job. Definitely recommend a read.