Review Detail of Ototsu_Yume in In dragonball world as a loli

Whilst there is only one chapter with content currently released I find myself very intrigued as to how the story will progress and it has already grabbed my attention as the characters portrayed so far make for very entertaining interactions. My only nitpicks are the lack of spacing which is a minor issue as the grammar is impeccable and the infrequent updates. (One chapter in 17 posts and not updated for two months so I'm hoping this hasn't been dropped before it has begun, as it truly does have some quite a bit of potential from the author.)