Review Detail of kazesenken in Transmigration: The Narcissistic Cinderella

The strong point of this novel so far from the chapters I read are: the unique, uncharacteristic female lead and the potential that I see going forward with this kind of story. However, the execution seems a bit messy. The world building is a bit lacking and inconsistent. The dialogue so far is lacking in variety. I would advise to start off with more background and world building, which you seem to do in chapter 4, but seems placed weirdly. I find it difficult to appreciate a MC that so far has little personality other than reacting wildly to the current situation. There needs to be more inner thought and character to make the reader see and sympathize with the MC. I think the story would improve greatly if it was outlined a bit better.