Item: Because I simply love you
Rating: 1.8
Author: Dundet

DundetLv154yr

2020-05-14 15:15

I am conflicting about this novel. In one side I don't condone *****ery whatever reasons you had to enter marriage. Also the ML amd his wfie though it is said he was trapped didn't show in all the chapters I read prior to him meet the FL that he was unhappy, he treated his wife ok. And the author failed to explain when did he start to like the FL or why he didn't try tonsearch for the FL food testing. So I can'y vote for this novel for all of the reasons unknown

Because I simply love you

enthu_reader

4.6

524 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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enthu_readerAuthor

Sorry to know that you are conflicting about the novel 😢 I know falling in love when one is still married is a sensitive topic and I have tried my best to adjust the circumstances to make it just. As to why Jinhai treated Huian ok before meeting Nana, I will show it when when she wakes up from coma.🙂 And he didn't search for Nana, I think I have written that part but failed to frame it well. Because that same day he came to know that he married Huian, so he wasn't in the state of mind to look for her. Sorry for the long reply. I hope you understand my side. Thank you for your review 😊. I appreciate your constructive criticism.

4yr

DundetLv15

Hi Author, believe it or not, I reread again all chapters twice to know what I missed. Overall, I think you write well but I am very confuse on ML answer everytime being asked when did he start in love with Nana, the always answer confuse me. Did he realize Nana was the girl that knocknhis car wi dow w years ago?, was it when she bumped on him when visited Cao?. Also, I missed the smart little boy and please don't be lenient to Serena😁 I am now ready to cast my vote. Great job author and thank you for the patience in reading our comment, that shows how much your writing able to engage us

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