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2020-08-25 19:25

Неплохо, хотя не хватает эволюции, или системы, чтобы было развитие интересным, но мне понравилась концепция водного мира, так как, таких произведений немного, кстати читать в оригинале прикольнее, чем в переводе, впрочем, все круто. Привет из России. Автор, хорошо постарался.

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