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2020-03-26 23:37

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The Hollow God

PeaceAndQuiet
4.7
31 Chs

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PeaceAndQuiet
PeaceAndQuietAuthor

My mom told me my stories are always the best and though i was suspicious that she only said that because i was her son, who am i to question my mother?

5yr

IWRobot
IWRobotLv1

this is my brief analysis of the story so far(chapter 16),may contain minor spoilers, Story - 5/5 Not a genius idea but it do it very well,reminds me an anime from past year Honzuki no genkokujou,one of the few isekai animes that are worth watching, has a simple idea but fulfills its purpose in the gorgeousness of its simplicity Stability of updates - 5/5 Dumb thing to exists,take your time to do a great story World building/background - 4.5/5 One of the most important aspect on a isekai is your world building and The only problem is because for a ocean you can do a lot of a things with it,the ocean has divisions,depending on which ocean you are(pacific,atlantic...) the vegetation and species of animals change,you can give a lot of details for describe the environment,it doesn't have to be credible but there are a lot of things to explore in the ocean,but despite that, the work gives you a very good feeling that the characters are in the ocean and that’s what matters. Characters - 5/5 For me, the most important element of a story(so I'm going to write more here).I usually think that a story has good characters if you can imagine knowing them in real life or, if not, there is some deep reason behind it,and this work suceeds. The crab has an explanation in its acts in chapters after its presentation,and the thing that really stands out is the MC,a person with an obsession with knowing how a healthy life works,seeing he discovering new things and the new world and exploring it is simply splendid,the most immersive thing I’ve ever seen in a story until is a character knowing new things,like a manga called Oyasumi Punnpun,a manga that has some of the deepest characters ever created, this manga has its highest points when the protagonist is getting to know the things of life,i felt at some times reading this like I felt reading Punpun,I hope this work reaches the level that was Punpun. Enjoyment - 5/5 The most important thing when you reading something,this is a very fluid story just go read and enjoy. Fluid like a wave on ocean.(haha)

4yr
Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15

Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. The story so far is amazing.

4yr
valiantxvillainous
valiantxvillainousLv3

Reveal spoiler

4yr
HRez
HRezLv4

Unique concept really interesting start to a story you could say a breath of fresh air. Excited to find out what happens in the future of the characters development. Good stuff keep it up!

5yr
Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv11

one of the best "isekai" webnovel so far. Quite a unique concept and i love it. Just sad the author isn´t doing this full time, but beggars can´t be choosers . Anyway 10/10 story and humor. can´t wait how it will go on.

4yr
LizardLord
LizardLordLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Ignar
IgnarLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

The mc is rather stupid and withing a few chapters he becomes a mount for a stuck up crab that sounds like a look princess that's pretty much the plot from there on mc obeys crab and acts like her horse and crab acts like she's a queen

4yr
Legacy_x777
Legacy_x777Lv4

Like it so far, just hope no turning human permanently.👌👌🙌🙌👍👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍✍️✍️🤟🙏🙏🙏🙏✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

5yr
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