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DaoistlHYvdyLv14yr
2020-06-28 22:26

It was indeed a good story kahit halatang baguhan ang author. 馃榿 The plot itself maganda kaso may ibang chapters na masyadong mahaba. Pero overall, maganda naman ang kwento with twists and drama. Mahilig ako sa actions so medyo gusto ko yung character nung bida na marunong makipaglaban. Good job awtor.

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MissKc_21
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thanks for appreciating my work. I'll try my best to improve more. Please do continue to support me with my new story! I'll be planning for another genre of story. Thanks!

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AnnaShannel_Lin
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Fair and Honest Review based on my perspective: Writing Quality: It's relatively good though there are few spelling errors, the author manage to bring it into a good paragraph. Grammar is good! Stability of Updating: Fast pace and stable. Story Development: Literally good enough to capture readers attention. Character Design: Good enough base on the synopsis and plot. Each chapters leave a good impression to those who love action, drama and suspense. World Background: Slightly lacking but it is understandable because the novel setting was at the author's homeland. Slightly, each conversation started with small letter which supposedly it should be a capital letter. First 10 chapters were impressive and it hooks readers attention. Definitely this one is a hidden gem. The author possess a wide imagination. Keep it up darling, you're way up to success soon!

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Stohker_Moh
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The characters have unique roles, unexpectedly revealing as you read through the story. You鈥檒l have mixed feelings while diving into the author鈥檚 imagination. Nice work but you need to add more emotions on characters and improve the writing quality as well. The plot is good, so yes. Wishing you to write more.

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