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TheMystic
TheMysticLv34yr
2020-07-19 00:09

I don’t usually review something, especially a fanfic. But your story was cool and I enjoyed reading it. I really liked how you have blended the different universes into each other, if you continue like this, it will become an amazing fanfic. I didn’t give 5 stars because stability of updates and some small mistakes in writing which aren’t that important. I suggest you give the story a meaningful plot since it has a lot of potential despite being made for fun, this speaks of your high talent. Keep up the good work, thank you for the story. TheMystic

The Last Kryptonian

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Thank you for your kind words.

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