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unwashed_heathen
unwashed_heathenLv15yr
2019-11-11 10:50

The protagonist is so powerful the story has no meaning. It might be salvageable if there was anything else worthwhile in this story but none of the characters have any personality or meaningful character interaction and there's no real plot to speak of. The protagonist just goes around collecting powers for the sake of collecting powers and isn't even using them, considering his family randomly dies for no reason. You are basically an all powerful god that is always getting stronger and you can't even be bothered to put any protections on your only family? It's dumb and contrived so that the protagonist can wander around other worlds making thoughtless actions with nothing to tie him down.

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LuxVonDeux
LuxVonDeuxAuthor

ok

HeartRend
HeartRendLv6

ok

LuxVonDeux:ok
BloodRiverDaoist
BloodRiverDaoistLv5

Ok boomer

MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Make your own story then come back and complain lol

yamachy
yamachyLv13

Yup

TheTrueGilgamesh
TheTrueGilgameshLv6

It's the writterπŸ˜‚

MyrMyr:Make your own story then come back and complain lol
Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.

MyrMyr:Make your own story then come back and complain lol
MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Oof sorry that my opinion offends you so long after I wrote it ;~; I dwidnt mwean two ofwend ywu kwind kweyboard warriow swan

Djabilong:Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.
MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Oof sorry that my opinion offends you so long after I wrote it ;~; I dwidnt mwean two ofwend ywu kwind kweyboard warriow swan

Djabilong:Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.
MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Oof sorry that my opinion offends you so long after I wrote it ;~; I dwidnt mwean two ofwend ywu kwind kweyboard warriow swan

Djabilong:Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.
MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Oof sorry that my opinion offends you so long after I wrote it ;~; I dwidnt mwean two ofwend ywu kwind kweyboard warriow swan

Djabilong:Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.
MyrMyr
MyrMyrLv14

Welp my reply I irrelevant now that it posted 50 times ... I concende this battle

Djabilong:Ah yes, the "gew wroit it yorselv" kneejerk reaction. Classic.
DURJOY_Barua
DURJOY_BaruaLv1

ok

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