Review Detail of BobbyCSB in Abyssal Lord of the Magi World
Review detail
Overall, this is your stereotypical 'System' based story where the MC relies on the 'System' as their crutch to develop and grow in power. Nevermind that the MC has reincarnated twice and have reached lofty heights in one of his previous lives. The MC is thoroughly reliant on that crutch instead of using his previous experience to get stronger, the MC is painfully immature to the point that you think he wasn't in any position by a servant in his previous lives. I cannot recommend this story despite so many 'glowing' reviews to it. Most of these reviews are just pandering and toe kissing with lack of any substance on why the story deserves its 5 Stars. You want my input? Here. Character Development : 2/5 Story Grounding : 2/5 World Building : 3/5 Sub-Plot & Arching Plot : 2/5 Conclusion: Worth the read only if you have nothing else to read. Or read if you find the story interesting to you. Seriously, leave actual reviews in Author/WebNovel staff. I am appalled that there is a distinct lack of proper reviews from the masses.
Abyssal Lord of the Magi World
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Additionally, a system does not need to provide him quests or rewards. It just needs to work with the user to provide him answers in which he or she can infer results from as well as analysing data that could benefit the user. THAT is a system. Does the MC uses this? Yes? Then it is a system user. I understand that you might love this story, but buddy I am criticizing in terms of writing quality, character developments and plot tracks. Stop wasting my time on trying to argue if he uses a system by your definition or not. I'm calling this story crap because objectively it is crap. If you love it, good. Enjoy it. My review should have NO effect on you. Piss off.
bigbeeboyhere:no, it isn't. There aren't any quests he has to do, there aren't any rewards for reaching certain milestones. All he has is the equivalent of an analysis skill which cannot be compared to a system, period.
no, it isn't. There aren't any quests he has to do, there aren't any rewards for reaching certain milestones. All he has is the equivalent of an analysis skill which cannot be compared to a system, period.
BobbyCSB:An AI Chip that analyzes IS A SYSTEM. What are you on about?
Sir, a skill that analyzes and thus provides him answers as well as previous experience to overcome challenges is a system. Period. /ˈsɪstəm/ / a set of things working together as parts of a mechanism or an interconnecting network; a complex whole.
bigbeeboyhere:no, it isn't. There aren't any quests he has to do, there aren't any rewards for reaching certain milestones. All he has is the equivalent of an analysis skill which cannot be compared to a system, period.