BobbyCSB
Story Critic, Archer, Gamer. I will be extremely critical about your book quality. However, it should have no impact on your enjoyment if you love your books.
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Submariners don't use open fire. Depending on country, they would always note tube number and launch munition type. "Tube 1, Torpedo Seeker. Launched."
Planes use power levers to actuate power to the engine. The feet are used for tail control.
So says the sis-con himself.
Additionally, a system does not need to provide him quests or rewards. It just needs to work with the user to provide him answers in which he or she can infer results from as well as analysing data that could benefit the user. THAT is a system. Does the MC uses this? Yes? Then it is a system user. I understand that you might love this story, but buddy I am criticizing in terms of writing quality, character developments and plot tracks. Stop wasting my time on trying to argue if he uses a system by your definition or not. I'm calling this story crap because objectively it is crap. If you love it, good. Enjoy it. My review should have NO effect on you. Piss off.