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Review Detail of GodsGolem in Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

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GodsGolem
GodsGolemLv122yrGodsGolem

Very little, if any world building. Grammar and tenses are all over the place, super jarring to read. Dialogue seems like it was written by a grade schooler. MC makes nonsensical decisions at random. Super forced plot. Do not read this hot garbage.

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Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

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bigbeeboyhere
bigbeeboyhereLv3bigbeeboyhere

seems copy-pasted from somewhere else

1yr
Fuhong_Ji
Fuhong_JiLv15Fuhong_Ji

What do you mean? Its all written very well with adequate amount of world building and the sentences are wellw ritten

2yr
Lordfifth14372
Lordfifth14372Lv4Lordfifth14372

read again dude, author changes from present tense to past tense back and forth so many times that it breaks immersion completely.

Fuhong_Ji:What do you mean? Its all written very well with adequate amount of world building and the sentences are wellw ritten
2yr
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